Hi Georgia, Your poem is very cool. I love that you have rhymed the words. Maybe next time you add more to your poem like example describing what your pets look like and their colours and add some bright colours and pictures just to be helpful. But you did a great job with your poem. I can't wait to see more from your blog.
Hi Georgina,
ReplyDeleteI like the choice of words
From Sam
Hi Georgia,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very cool. I love that you have rhymed the words. Maybe next time you add more to your poem like example describing what your pets look like and their colours and add some bright colours and pictures just to be helpful. But you did a great job with your poem. I can't wait to see more from your blog.
You did a Awesome Job!
Eden ;)